I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at . Document: draft-atarius-dispatch-meid-urn-as-instanceid-05.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20171124 IETF LC End Date: 20171208 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2 and 11 page 7: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 1 page 2: please expand abbrev in at the first use in the body for URN (optional as it is a well known abbrev according to https://www.rfc-editor.org/materials/abbrev.expansion.txt), NSS and MEID. - 1 page 2: please mark the RFC 5626 quote as a quote (e.g., in its own paragraph with a few spaces more for indentation. - 2 page 3: RFC 2119 was updated by RFC 8174 (note the RFC Editor will update this section if you don't) - 5 page 4: UAC abbrev was not introduces: I believe it stands for User Agent Client (so it is bad practice but the text is not ambiguous) - 9 page 6: I suggest to remove the comma in "Entities that log the instance-id, need ..." (but if you prefer to keep it I shan't object) - 9 page 6: IPSec -> IPsec - 11.1 [5] page 7: RFC 2119 -> 8174 Regards Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr