I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html ). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-abfab-gss-eap-naming-06.txt Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan Review Date: 2012/10/08 IESG Telechat date: 2012/10/11 Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. I do have some minor comments you may wish to address. Minor ===== * Section 6.1: This sentence is a bit difficult to read. "This attribute is returned with the authenticated output of GSS_Get_name_attribute true only when the mechanism can successfully authenticated the SAML statement." Suggest rewording to "When GSS_Get_name_attribute is called, this attribute will be returned with the authenticated output set to true only if the mechanism can successfully authenticate the SAML statement." (Is my interpretation correct?) * Section 6.2: s/encoding as "%20"/encoded as "%20"/ Thanks Suresh