Yes, draft 13 addresses all my comments (and also addresses issues I engaged them on following the review) and is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. My thanks to the authors for their work. Yours, Joel On 1/15/16 5:26 PM, Joel M. Halpern wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-codec-oggopus-10 Ogg Encapsulation for the Opus Audio Codec Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern Review Date: IETF LC End Date: 27-January-2016 IESG Telechat date: N/A Summary: This document is nearly ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. The reviewer believes the status issues needs to be addressed, and would like the minor issue identified below discussed. Major issues: I do not see how we can have a standards track document for using an Informational format. RFC 3533 is Informational. At the very least, the last call needed to identify the downref to RFC 3533. (It is not clear whether the reference to RFC 4732 needs to be normative or could be informative.) Minor issues: While I do not completely understand ogg lacing values, there appears to be an internal inconsistency in the text in section 3: 1) "if the previous page with packet data does not end in a continued packet (i.e., did not end with a lacing value of 255)" 2) "a packet that continues onto a subsequent page (i.e., when the page ends with a lacing value of 255)" The first quote says that continued packets end with a lacing value of 255, and the second quote says that continued packets end with a lacing value of less than 255. At the very least, these need to be clarified. Nits/editorial comments: is there some way to indicate that the ogg encoding constraints (e.g. 48kHz granule and 2.5 ms timing) are sufficiently broad to cover all needed cases? Yours, Joel Halpern _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art at ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art