Please see attached review. Brian I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-eman-rfc4133bis-05.txt Reviewer: Brian Carpenter Review Date: 2013-01-19 IETF LC End Date: 2013-01-25 IESG Telechat date: Summary: Ready (nits) -------- Comment: -------- I didn't find any mention of a MIB Doctor review in the tracker. Since two authors are MIB Doctors, it should be OK. I did not review the details of the MIB module. Nits: ----- In the Abstract, "This document specifies version of the Entity MIB" seems to lack a "4". I would have expected a short paragraph starting "Version 4 of this MIB addresses new requirements... " just before section 2.1.