I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at . Document: draft-ietf-lmap-information-model-17 Reviewer: Russ Housley Review Date: 2017-02-26 IETF LC End Date: 2017-03-08 IESG Telechat date: Unknown Summary: Ready Major Concerns: Section 3.1 says that the pre-configuration information contains the certificate of the Controller or the certificate of the CA which issued the certificate for the Controller. Section 3.1.1 includes ma-preconfig-credentials. Are these the same? Section 6 says that secure communication channels are needed. This means that some components of this system (at least the Controller) must have secret keys or private keys. I think that Section 6 should talk about which components of this system have keys and the consequences if the keys are not well protected. Minor Concerns: The Introduction in RFC 7594 says: "There is a desire to be able to coordinate the execution of broadband measurements and the collection of measurement results across a large scale set of Measurement Agents (MAs)." The Fact that LMAP is about broadband measurements should be stated in the first paragraph of the Introduction of this document. Nits: In Section 3, the reason for the 6 categories should probably be placed before the list instead of several paragraphs later. In 3.1: s/If the MA ID is not provided at this stage then/ /If the MA ID is not provided at this stage, then/