I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other review comments. I previously reviewed -04 of this I-D and made a number of suggestions. The current version has those suggestions incorporated, and I see no concerns with text added between versions. Brian