I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at . Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-rid-14 Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review Date: 2018-02-27 IETF LC End Date: 2018-03-30 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: Ready with nits Nits: I could see implementor disagreement around what's allowed when modifying a session driven by the statement in the introduction that "They do not relax any existing descriptions." (where "They" here are the restrictions communicated with this attribute). Please look for a way to make it clear that an updating offer-answer round _can_ result in fewer restrictions than the original round did, just not fewer restrictions than the description places on the media if the "rid" extension is not present. (Micronit): I don't think the "To be clear" in the first paragraph on page 5 helps. I also worry that "it" may not have a clear meaning in "Such implementations must send it" later in that paragraph. At the description of max-bpp on page 7, the last sentence is awkward. Do you perhaps mean "These values MUST NOT be encoded with more than four digits to the right of the decimal point."? In the second paragraph of section 6, "its own unique 5-tuple" is arcane if the reader hasn't read the rest of the rtcweb work. Could you provide a description or a pointer to a description here? At section 6.3, where you say 'For each "a=rid" line:', should you say 'For each "a=rid" line that has not been discarded by the requirements in section 6.2:'? I found "a non-empty union" to be a confusing description of the condition you are trying to convey in section 8. (A union of two sets, at least one of which is not empty is going to be non-empty). I'm not sure intersection is the right word here either. Perhaps you could find a different way to characterize the condition? The BNF for rid-id allows rid-ids like "This-is_my-favorite" or "Gm-Cqzkj4VHVD". But all the examples use single digits for rid-ids. I see the statement that "the actual identifiers used for RIDs are expected to be opaque". I strongly encourage putting some opaque ones in the examples. Consider reminding people that ABNF quoted strings are case-insensitive, and that the grammar as written will allow things like "MaX-WiDtH" and "rECv". If that's not what you want, consider bringing in RFC7405.