I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at . Document: draft-ietf-netconf-rfc6536bis-07 Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review Date: 2017-10-24 IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-25 IESG Telechat date: 2017-10-26 Summary: A well written document that is ready for publication Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: These are really minor but I notices them during the review. Paragraphs 1 and 2 of Section 2.2 (simplicity have a lot of overlapping content. Perhaps they could be merged. "This choice matches if all leafs present in the rule match the request." Maybe it is different in C/S but the plural of leaf is usually leaves.