I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <  http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/ area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-farrell-perpass-attack-04 Reviewer: Scott Brim Review Date: 2014-01-18 IETF LC End Date: 2013-12-31 IESG Telechat date: (if known): 2014-01-23 Summary: Ready Major issues: none Minor issues: none Nits/editorial comments: There are editorial changes I could suggest, but it's good enough.