I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at . Document: draft-ietf-anima-stable-connectivity-07 Reviewer: Matthew A. Miller Review Date: 2017-11-26 IETF LC End Date: 2017-11-26 IESG Telechat date: N/A Summary: This document is ready to be published as informational, but there are a number of nits that ought be addressed before final publication. Overall, the document is Major issues: NONE Minor issues: NONE Nits/editorial comments: * Throughout, there is a mix of the term "data plane" and "data-plane". One form should be chosen and the rest corrected to match. * In Section 1.2. "Data Communications Networks (DCNs)", first paragraph; "'th" should be "'s" (or just "s"): "In the late 1990'th and ..." should be "In the late 1990s and ...". * In Section 1.2. "Data Communications Networks (DCNs)", first paragraph; the word "where" should be "were" in the fragment "These where (and still are) ...". * In Section 1.2. "Data Communications Networks (DCNs)", first paragraph; there is a missing "a" between "are" and "separate" in the fragment "they are separate network entirely". * In Section 2.1.1. "Simple Connectivity for Non-ACP capable NMS Hosts", first paragraph; there is a mismatch in plurality in the third sentence; instead of: """ They acts as the default router to those NMS hosts and provide them with IPv6 connectivity into the ACP. """ it should be: """ They act as the default routers to those NMS hosts and provide them with IPv6 connectivity into the ACP. """ * In Section 2.1.3. "Simultaneous ACP and Data Plane Connectivity", last paragraph; the following sentence seems to be missing a word or two: """ If the secure ACP was extendable via untrusted routers then it would be a lot more verify the secure domain assertion. """ * In Section 2.1.4. "IPv4-only NMS Hosts", second paragraph after the ordered list; the word "thought" should be "through" in the fragment "... be reachable thought the IPv6/IPv4 ...". * In Section 2.1.5. "Path Selection Policies", fourth paragraph from the section's end; there is an extra "of" between "shaping" and "at": """ Traffic policing and/or shaping of at the ACP edge in the NOC can be used to throttle applications such as software download into the ACP. """ * In Section 2.2. "Stable Connectivity for Distributed Network/OAM", second paragraph; there is a missing "to" between "start" and "provide" in the fragment "... tried to start provide common ...". * In Section 2.2. "Stable Connectivity for Distributed Network/OAM", second paragraph; the word "applicable" should be "applied" in the fragment "... how ell it applicable to a ...". * In Section 3.1. "No IPv4 for ACP", third paragraph; the word "as" should be "to" in the fragment "... from a native transport as just a service on the edge." * In Section 3.1. "No IPv4 for ACP", last paragraph; the word "type" should be "types" in the fragment "In other type of networks as well, ...". * In Section 3.1. "No IPv4 for ACP", last paragraph; the word "support" should be "supported" in the fragment "... family will be support so all use...".