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Document: draft-ietf-appsawg-uri-get-off-my-lawn-04




Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour




Review Date: 2014-05-06




IETF LC End Date:  2014-05-07




IESG Telechat date: 2014-05-15




 




Summary:




This draft is ready to be published as BCP RFC but I have some editorial comments.




 




 




Nits/editorial comments:




-[Page 2], Section 1, "Because the owner of the URI (as defined in [webarch]




Section 2.2.2.1) is choosing to use the server or the software"




 




it is not clear what is meant by the part "or the software"




 




-[Page 6], Section 2.5, 




"For example, an application that defines common fragment identifiers




   across media types not controlled by it is not conforming,...




" 




suggestion for easier read:




"




For example, an application that defines common fragment identifiers




   across media types not controlled by it is said to be non-conforming, and would




"




 




 




Best Regards,




Meral




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Meral Shirazipour




Ericsson




www.ericsson.com