I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at . Document: draft-ietf-bmwg-ipv6-nd-04.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20170116 IETF LC End Date: 20170123 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready with nits Major issues: none Minor issues: the title (and the Abstract) is a bit misleading: it is not the benchmarking of the ND protocol which has ~12 different functions but the benchmarking of a particular function on a router. Now it is the critical one so my concern is more the document is limited to only this one... Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2 and 7 page 12: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 1 page 2: the limit to a router explains why the verb send is replaced by forward... and why there is nothing about redirection - 1 page 2: determine the IPv6 next-hop's link-layer address -> determine the outgoing interface and the IPv6 next-hop's link-layer address - 2.2.1 page 5: et cetera -> etc - 3.1.2 page 9 (twice) and 3.2.2 page 10; recieved -> received - 3.1.2 page 9: IMHO you should define the "initial" term (for final the meaning is obvious) - 3.2.1 page 10: (i.e.,IPv6 -> (i.e., IPv6 - 3.2.2 page 10: in "packets-received will either be equal to zero or packets-received." the last received -> sent. Regards Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr