I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at Document:                                   draft-ietf-dhc-dynamic-shared-v4allocation-06 Reviewer:                                     Christer Holmberg Review Date:                               27 April 2015 IETF LC End Date:                       6 May 2015 IETF Telechat Date:                   N/A Summary:                                     The document is well written, and almost ready for publication. However, I have spotted a few places where I think some additional text is needed. Major Issues: None Minor Issues: None Editorial Issues:   Section 2: Q_2_1: The text says that the solution is not applicable for network access over shared mediums. I think it would be useful to add some words describing why that is the case.   Section 10:                              Q_10_1:                              The text says: “The security considerations in [RFC2131] and [RFC7341] are to be considered.”                              I think a little more text is needed, talking about what type of security considerations are referenced.                                Q_10_2: In section 10.1, I don’t think you need to refer to section 2 for the target use-case. Similar to my comment Q_2_1, you should give a little more information about the DoS attack vulnerability in a shared medium.