For the record... This is the telechat review for this documents. /Elwyn -------- Forwarded Message -------- > From: elwynd at googlemail.com > Reply-to: elwynd at googlemail.com > To: Romascanu, Dan (Dan) > Cc: Glen Zorn , Russ Housley " > , dime at ietf.org, > draft-ietf-dime-pmip6-lr at tools.ietf.org > Subject: Re: [Dime] FW: Russ Housley's Discuss on > draft-ietf-dime-pmip6-lr-09: (with DISCUSS) > Date: Fri, 17 Feb 2012 09:33:40 +0000 > > Hi, Russ, Dan and authors, > > The latest version (v09) addresses the minor issues that I raised on v07 > as discussed with Qin. However I observe that the editorial nits > *didn't* get fixed, especially the comment about 'itself' in s1 which I > ought to be improved. > > Regards, > Elwyn > > On Tue, 2012-02-14 at 08:51 +0100, Romascanu, Dan (Dan) wrote: > > Hi Glen, > > > > The change control of I-Ds submitted to the IESG belongs to the > > shepherding AD. I prefer to hold submissions during the week prior to a > > telechat so that all ADs review the same version, and editors do all > > changes at once after the telechat. Now that you submitted, it's done, > > but in case other ADs enter DISCUSSes that require changes you will need > > to issue yet another version. > > > > Russ, Elwyn, can you please check if you concerns were answered? > > > > Thanks and Regards, > > > > Dan > > > > > > > -----Original Message----- > > > From: Glen Zorn [ mailto:glenzorn at gmail.com] > > > Sent: Tuesday, February 14, 2012 7:14 AM > > > To: Romascanu, Dan (Dan) > > > Cc: dime at ietf.org; "@tools.ietf.org>"; Russ Housley " > > > Subject: Re: [Dime] FW: Russ Housley's Discuss on draft-ietf-dime- > > > pmip6-lr-09: (with DISCUSS) > > > > > > On 2/14/2012 7:16 AM, Romascanu, Dan (Dan) wrote: > > > > Document editors, > > > > > > > > Can you please check what is the status of these comments? Please do > > > not make a change now, even if all comments were accepted, but wait > > > until after the telechat to issue a revised version. > > > > > > > > > > Your message and Russ's DISCUSS seem to be contradictory. In any > > case, > > > a revision was posted last night, long before the DISCUSS. > > > > > > > Thanks and Regards, > > > > > > > > Dan > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > -----Original Message----- > > > > From: iesg-bounces at ietf.org [ mailto:iesg-bounces at ietf.org] On Behalf > > > Of Russ Housley > > > > Sent: Tuesday, February 14, 2012 12:55 AM > > > > To: The IESG > > > > Cc: draft-ietf-dime-pmip6-lr at tools.ietf.org; elwynd at dial.pipex.com; > > > dime-chairs at tools.ietf.org > > > > Subject: Russ Housley's Discuss on draft-ietf-dime-pmip6-lr-09: > > (with > > > DISCUSS) > > > > > > > > Russ Housley has entered the following ballot position for > > > > draft-ietf-dime-pmip6-lr-09: Discuss > > > > > > > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to > > all > > > > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut > > > this > > > > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > > > > > > Please refer to http://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss- > > > criteria.html > > > > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > --------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > - > > > > DISCUSS: > > > > > > --------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > - > > > > > > > > > > > > The authors have agreed to make some changes based on the Gen-ART > > > > Review by Elwyn Davies on 2-Feb-2012. The changes have not been > > > > posted yet. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > > > > DiME mailing list > > > > DiME at ietf.org > > > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dime > > > > _______________________________________________ > > DiME mailing list > > DiME at ietf.org > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dime