I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-mip4-nemov4-dynamic-05 Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani Review Date: Oct-28-2011 IETF LC End Date: Nov-01-2011 IESG Telechat date: Nov-03-2011 Summary: This draft is ready as a Proposed Standard. Major issues: 0 Minor issues: 1 Nits/editorial comments: 1 Minor issues: - S3.1: "According to this specification ...", I am not sure what "this" refers to? Does it refer to draft-ietf-mip4-nemov4-dynamic or does it, instead, refer to rfc5177 (which is the topic of discussion in the previous paragraph from where the above is quoted)? Nits: - S3.2, third paragraph: s/a prefix it MUST/a prefix, it MUST/ Thanks, - vijay -- Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent 1960 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9C-533, Naperville, Illinois 60566 (USA) Email: vkg at {bell-labs.com,acm.org} / vijay.gurbani at alcatel-lucent.com Web: http://ect.bell-labs.com/who/vkg/