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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.




 




Document: draft-ietf-mpls-smp-requirements-06




Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour




Review Date: 2014-06-23




IETF LC End Date:   2014-06-23




IESG Telechat date: NA




 




 




Summary:




This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC but I have some comments.




 




 




Nits/editorial comments:




-[Page 8], Section 4.1 




"the commitment of the shared resources are be coordinated"--missing 'to'-->"the commitment of the shared resources are to be coordinated"




 




 




Best Regards,




Meral




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Meral Shirazipour




Ericsson Research




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