I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-netconf-call-home-11.txt Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan Review Date: 2015/10/20 IESG Telechat date: 2015/10/22 Summary: The draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard but I do have a comment that you may wish to address. Minor ===== * Section 3.1 S3: The server cannot immediately start the SSH server protocol without waiting for SSH connection initiation from the SSH client, right? If yes, shouldn't there be an additional condition here? Thanks Suresh