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Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-5761-update-02.txt 

Reviewer: Elwyn Davies

Review Date: 2016/09/15

IETF LC End Date: 2016/09/22

IESG Telechat date: (if known) -

Summary: Ready (apart from a tiny bit of pedantry).

Major issues:

None

Minor issues:

None

Nits/editorial comments:

s3.1: It is a bit pedantic, but 'to be sure, to be sure', add new first line:

   In the rest of this section references to Sections 4 and 8 are to sections in [RFC 5761].

s3.1: Maybe s/OLD TEXT/EXISTING TEXT/ and s/NEW TEXT/REPLACEMENT TEXT/

s5: s/specifcation/specification/ (sorreee!)

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