I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.   Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft.   Document:                         draft-ietf-ccamp-otn-g709-info-model-12 Reviewer:                           Christer Holmberg Review Date:                     24 October IETF LC End Date:             19 September, 2013 IESG Telechat date:         24 October   Summary:           The document is well written, and ready for publication, but I think one of the editorial nit I previously raised is still not addressed.   Major issues: -   Minor issues: -   Nits/editorial comments:     General: -----------           Q_G_1: The document still uses inconsistent terminology when referencing ITU-T specifications. Examples:               - G.709 [G.709-2012]             - [G.709-2012]             - ITU-T G.872 recommendation [G.872]             - G.709-2012             - ITU-T G.798 [G.798]             etc etc...           When I sent my previous review, you suggestion was to use " ITU-T recommendation G.XXX used on first use and then just G.XXX".