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Document: draft-ietf-elegy-rfc8989bis-03
Reviewer: Reese Enghardt
Review Date: 2023-01-16
IETF LC End Date: 2023-01-23
IESG Telechat date: 2023-02-02

Summary: This document is clear and concise. It is almost ready for publication, just one minor issue.

Major issues: None.

Minor issues:

In Section 5.1:

"Some organizations might not
   be deterred in either case, while others might now find such an
   attack to not be feasible."
As the cost of the attack decreases, should the "not" be removed in the second part here, so it'll read "others might now find such an attach to be feasible"?

Nits/editorial comments: None.