Hello, I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see: http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Early Review/Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft. Document: draft-ietf-elegy-rfc8989bis-04.txt Reviewer: Acee Lindem Review Date: 01/26/2023 IETF LC End Date: date-if-known Intended Status: Best Current Practice. Summary: This draft makes RFC 8989 NomCom eligibility criteria update permanent. The updated criteria includes remote attendence, WG chairing, and RFC publication. This document is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be considered prior to publication. The intent of the draft is clear but the readability could benefit from the editorial comments attached. Major Issues: None Minor Issues: None Nits: The mathematical expression in Figure 4 is too wide to fit on a standard RFC page and should be spread over multiple lines. I've suggested a way this could be done in the diff. Thanks, Acee