I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-ietf-geopriv-res-gw-lis-discovery-05 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: Jul-31-2013 IETF LC End Date: Jul-31-2013 IESG Telechat date: TBD Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. [Ready with nits.] The draft describes a means by which Devices behind a residential gateway may discover the correct Location Information Server on the access network providing Internet access to residential gateway. The Device may thereby gain access to certain location-based services. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits: Section 1, 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: should "data" be appended after "location"? The wording is otherwise odd. Page 7, 3rd paragraph: change "which" to "that". Page 9, section 4.2, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: I'll admit my ignorance of the finer points of the DNS and inquire what this sentence is supposed to mean. To what are the additional domain names added and how does this allow a DNS record to cover a larger set of addresses? Perhaps it's just the wording or my lack of knowledge, but I didn't follow this point fully. Page 9, section 4.2, 2nd bullet item: change "sucessively" to "successively". Page 11, section 4.6, 1st paragraph, 4th sentence: insert "a" before "STUN server" or change "server" to "servers" depending on how many need to be configured. Page 12, 1st sentence: delete "a". Page 12, 1st sentence: What about /56 for IPv6? Page 14, 3rd paragraph, 2nd sentence: delete "a" before "IP addresses" or change "addresses" to "address" depending on how many false addresses you mean. Page 14, 6th paragraph, last sentence: Are there any concrete suggestions on who a device might determine accuracy?