Hello, Amy Yemin asked me to review draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology revision 4. I already did a review of revision 2, so I will focus on the differences between the two versions. I really like the fact that the physical layer-2 address was moved into the general description of nodes and termination points. Common fields like this make it easier to write application and services that don't need to be updated with each new special case added to the format. I also think it is a good style that the "legacy" case for termination points was moved to the end of the list. I think revision 4 resolves the minor issues I had with draft revision 2. Henning Rogge On Tue, Mar 13, 2018 at 7:35 AM, Yemin (Amy) wrote: > Thank you, Henning. > > > > Amy > > From: Henning Rogge [mailto:hrogge@gmail.com] > Sent: Tuesday, March 13, 2018 1:43 PM > To: Yemin (Amy) > Subject: Re: Could you do the review?//RE: rtgdir Early Review requested: > draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology > > > > Yes, I will do so. > > > > Henning > > > > Am 13.03.2018 04:44 schrieb "Yemin (Amy)" : > > Hi Henning, > > Could you please reply if you can do the review or not? > Thanks. > > Amy > -----Original Message----- > From: Yemin (Amy) > Sent: Thursday, March 08, 2018 11:53 AM > To: 'Henning Rogge' > Cc: 'Susan Hares' ; Jonathan Hardwick > > Subject: RE: rtgdir Early Review requested: > draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology > > Hi Henning, > > Could you re-review the draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology again? > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology/ > > This is an early review request. There is some guidance and a template > here. > https://trac.ietf.org/trac/rtg/wiki/RtgDirGuidance > > The deadline for comments is March 19. Please let me know if you can do it, > or not. > > Many thanks > Amy > > -----Original Message----- > From: Susan Hares [mailto:skh@ndzh.com] > Sent: Thursday, March 08, 2018 12:56 AM > To: Jonathan Hardwick ; Yemin (Amy) > > Subject: rtgdir Early Review requested: > draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology > > > Early review of: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology (no specific > version) > Deadline: 2018-03-19 > Requested by: Susan Hares > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology/reviewrequest/10234/ > > rtgdir Early Review requested: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology > > It would be helpful to have the review done before the I2RS meeting at IETF > 101 >