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Ready with nits.

From the operational point of view, I am not sure how an exisitng/old application will behave when it receive this message with multiple value. Yes, RFC3326 has this text "An implementation is free to ignore Reason values that it does not understand." However, there is "MUST" in the old text "all of them MUST have different protocol values". I am not clear about existing implemenations. But posibly an application may check this rule and return error, since this is a "MUST". 
I am also interested why old text need a very hard rule "all of them MUST have different protocol values", but now relex. 

Cheers,
Tianran