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Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-scsi-layout-nvme-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2023-10-30
IETF LC End Date: 2023-11-01
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
THe security section has normative language “SHOULD NOT be deployed” in two paragraphs. Is there a reason for SHOULD NOT and not “MUST NOT”. I hope the security review will mention it since I am not a security expert