As an Ops reviewer, I have the following comments: The document describes a YANG model for Virtual Network (VN) Operations. It is almost ready for publication. I previously reviewed an earlier version of this document during the WGLC. There are several mentions of LTP and definitions related to YANG in this document, with some comments as follows: - The term "ltp" appears to be inconsistent: The introduction states: Characteristics of Virtual Network Access Points (VNAP) that describe how an AP is partitioned for multiple VNs sharing the AP and its reference to a Link Termination Point (LTP) of the Provider Edge (PE) Node. From this sentence, it seems that LTP refers to the LTP in the native TE topology, because in YANG, PE is defined as the PE node in the native TE Topology. While in the YANG model and the Examples in B.1. VN JSON, it looks like "ltp" is the LTP within the abstract node, correct? If so, could the YANG path be modified to a relative path of the abstract node? Also in Figures 2 and 3, the diagrams appear to show that L1-L8 are all LTPs of same kind. While in the examples of B.2. TE-topology JSON, these two typess of LTPs use different identifiers, therefore it is suggested to be clarified. - For "vn-member" YANG model, "src-vn-ap-id" and "dest-vn-ap-id" are better to contextually restricted to "ap"? ## Minor - In Section 4.3.1. VN Compute, it mentions "achieving this via path computation or 'compute only' tunnel setup does not provide the same functionality", it is suggested to add a reference to the definition of the TE tunnel. - In Section 4.3.3. Others, the "underlay" node mentions SR. It would be clearer if a reference to the SR YANG model could be added. - The content of Section 4.3.3. Others does not seem to belong to Section 4.3 Innovative Services. It is suggested to make it an independent section or combine it with Section 3.2.1. VN and AP Usage into a separate independent section. - The summary in Section 4.3.4 includes some content that is not discussed in 4.3, it is suggested to remove it, for example, Maintenance of AP and VNAP along with VN, VN construct to group of edge-to-edge links, Ability to support various VN and VNS Types. ## Nits - s/inter- domain/inter-domain - s/VN-Member/VN-member - s/L1, L2, L3, L4, L7 and L8/L1, L2, L3, L4, L7, and L8 - s/Provider Edge (PE) ./Provider Edge (PE). - s/To achieve this/To achieve this, - s/creation of VN/creation of a VN - s/(S2 and S7)/(S4 and S7)