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Document: draft-ietf-tls-keylogfile-01
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2024-04-12
IETF LC End Date: 2024-04-18
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready


Major Concerns:

None


Minor Concerns:

Section 3: The text says: "Access to the content of a file in
SSLKEYLOGFILE format allows an attacker to break the
confidentiality protection on any TLS connections that are
included in the file."  This is clearly true.  However, the
attacker this access to the keys can also break the integrity
protections.

Section 4: The registration of the new application/sslkeylogfile
media-type for all IETF registrations in the standards tree
requires a posting to the media-types@iana.org mail list.  A search
of the mail archive id not uncover "sslkeylogfile".  To avoid delay,
that mail list discussion should probably get started now.


Nits:

Section 1: s/file format that logging/file format for logging/