Early review requested from the General Area Review team
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Summary: The document covers the situation (cock up!) appropriately.  It is essentially ready.  I have suggested that some additional modification of the note in the IANA registry being shut down would be helpful.  There are also half a dozen editorial nits.

Minor Suggestion

The IANA Registry affected by this document (RTP Payload Format Media Types) references RFC 4855 and claims that it contains registration procedures and a registration template.  This document correctly asserts that this is untrue.  Perhaps this document should additionally ask  IANA to modify the reference to [RFC4855], [RFC-TBD1] and replace the second para of the note as follows:

OLD:
Registration procedures and a registration template can be found in [RFC4855].

NEW:
It was previously stated that registration procedures and a registration template can be found in [RFC4855].  This is not actually the case and [RFC4855] has been updated by [RFC-TBD1].

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This would be followed by the the text in this document starting "This registry has been closed..."

Editorial Nits

Abstract, s1:  Specifications not being sentient beings (probably).... s/to register themselves/ to specify registration of the format/

Abstract: s/"RTP Payload Formats Media Types"./"RTP Payload Formats Media Types" created by RFC 8088./ (which will suppress IDNITS complaints about not seeing RFC 8988 in the abstract/)

s1, para 1:  s/RTP payload formats/RTP payload formats created according to [RFC8088]/

s1, para 2:  s/various signalling usage/its various signalling usages/

s3, para 1: s/mandates/mandates in its IANA Considerations (Section 7.4)/

s4, para 2 (just after Table 1): s/add the following to the note to the registry:/add the following note to the registry:/