I'm the assigned ART area reviewer for this draft. It's ready with only a few small nits:

Section 5:

"More information about IANA's policies and procedures for how the cryptographic keys for the DNS root zone are managed (also known as "DNSSEC Practice Statements" or "DPSs") can be found at https://www.iana.org/dnssec/procedures (https://www.iana.org/dnssec/procedures)."

The URL is shown twice. The URL in parentheses can be removed. 

The [DPS] reference includes this URL, with a reference year of 2020:

https://www.iana.org/dnssec/procedures

However, that URL leads to a page of policy and procedure statements. This is the URL for the cited practice statement, with a reference year of 2024:

https://www.iana.org/dnssec/procedures/ksk-operator/ksk-dps-20240315.html

I tried to validate the XML examples using the RELAX NG Compact Schema provided in Section 2.1 but was unable to find a working online validator. It all looks correct, but I can't confirm that everything is valid.