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Document: draft-ietf-extra-6855bis-03
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2024-08-22
IETF LC End Date: 2024-08-29
IESG Telechat date: Unknown


Summary: Ready with Nits


Major Concerns:

None.


Minor Concerns:

Section 6: I think it would be helpful to add a phrase to introduce the
ABNF.  I suggest:

   This document extends the media-message ABNF production
   to match [RFC9051] as follows:

In addition, consider the use of <sourcecode type="abnf">.

Acknowledgments: Is seems very odd to talk about Jiankang Yao replacing
Sean Shen as an author but be silent about Arnt Gulbrandsen replacing
Chris Newman.


Nits:

Section 1: s/[RFC3501}}/[RFC3501]/

Section 6: s/has been enabled/are in use/
(This makes the text parallel with the next paragraph.)