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Document: draft-ietf-raw-technologies-10
Reviewer: Jiankang Yao
Review Date: 2024-09-10

Summary: Almost Ready for publication.

This document presents a series of recent reliable and available wireless technology evolutions. It is very useful. The document is very long, and there still have some nits. It needs further improvments. 

One suggestion:

Every section in sections 4, 5, 6 and 7 has the subsection"summary".

How about adding a new section "summary" which tries to summarize all sections from 4 to 7?

Best Regards
Jiankang Yao