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Document: draft-vandevenne-shared-brotli-format-11
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2024-10-01
IETF LC End Date: 2024-10-23
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: A well written document that could be sent to the RFC Editor, but ought to have a number of minor issues addressed first.

Major issues: None

Minor issues:
The document has six authors which I note are from the same company, when the maximum permitted by the IETF is normally five.

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The text says:
   Shared brotli extends brotli [RFC7932] with support for shared
   dictionaries, larger LZ77 window and a framing format.
it says similar in other places but not those words.

Nits picks that and the draft header up and says:

  -- The draft header indicates that this document updates RFC7932, but the
     abstract doesn't seem to mention this, which it should.
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Nits/editorial comments:
      * The framing format is a container format that allows to store
        multiple resources and refer to dictionaries.
Incorrect grammar perhaps:
      * The framing format is a container format that allows storage of
        multiple resources and that reference dictionaries.
or perhaps:
      * The framing format is a container format that allows the protocol to store
        multiple resources and refer to dictionaries.
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This prevents an adversary to use a private dictionary with user secrets
to compress content hosted on the adversary's origin.  

Incorrect grammar, perhaps
This prevents an adversary from using a private dictionary with user secrets
to compress content hosted on the adversary's origin.  

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